tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post6947974482440116267..comments2023-03-20T09:34:47.785+00:00Comments on Ad Astra (To The Stars): #Fridayflash - Hush, baby, hush...Amyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01304850820653245569noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-89720870578747719612010-01-28T20:47:23.517+00:002010-01-28T20:47:23.517+00:00Wow. This story was a lot less sinister than I'...Wow. This story was a lot less sinister than I'd suspected. Nicely done. You did a great job packing so much into so few words.Cat Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14160039271069426174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-27233619852109391652010-01-26T19:08:20.604+00:002010-01-26T19:08:20.604+00:00Aww, poor fellow. I imagine that would completely ...Aww, poor fellow. I imagine that would completely change things.<br /><br />And you fooled me well -- I figured the story was going somewhere else entirely!Danahttp://pixelenvy.ca/cgi/fff.cginoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-35376150689002710472010-01-26T16:01:51.082+00:002010-01-26T16:01:51.082+00:00Wow, this was very nice, and I always enjoy your t...Wow, this was very nice, and I always enjoy your twists :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-76551128607135881472010-01-25T22:54:34.928+00:002010-01-25T22:54:34.928+00:00Very powerful and I liked the sinister feel at the...Very powerful and I liked the sinister feel at the beginning that turned to sympathy.~Timhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06774944172261988587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-74156826631936356682010-01-24T22:04:37.689+00:002010-01-24T22:04:37.689+00:00I wish pathologists wouldn't mention dinner or...I wish pathologists wouldn't mention dinner or put their hands up to their face when they do autopsies. <br /><br />Vivid emotions here. Hopefully the good doctor will get a grip on himself.Mark Kerstetterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13307987573435067415noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-73015228944353927102010-01-24T12:56:32.960+00:002010-01-24T12:56:32.960+00:00Thank you for the lifeline at the end. ;-) I think...Thank you for the lifeline at the end. ;-) I think you're right. I can't imagine the emotions don't creep in in cases like this.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-55051231999683188822010-01-23T01:34:55.591+00:002010-01-23T01:34:55.591+00:00Wow...great twist. You captured the human quality ...Wow...great twist. You captured the human quality in a rather creepy job.Laura Enohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09982794146667832204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-54548948756212625392010-01-22T23:06:47.408+00:002010-01-22T23:06:47.408+00:00And people think pathologists have it easy because...And people think pathologists have it easy because they don't deal with living patients! You did a great job of not revealing whether the body was alive or dead until the end. Also, loved how you showed the guy's emotion.<br /><br />CDCecilia Dominichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12799727636246434837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-7382491917293427712010-01-22T22:05:26.047+00:002010-01-22T22:05:26.047+00:00Well done! Medicine is weird like this, you go al...Well done! Medicine is weird like this, you go along doing your job, not thinking too much about it, and then you get a patient that reminds you of someone you love and fall to pieces. You captured it and in such an intense and suspenseful way!Genevieve Jackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16178276724159826428noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-87620218926632035442010-01-22T19:16:29.474+00:002010-01-22T19:16:29.474+00:00I didn't want to know what he was up to, but I...I didn't want to know what he was up to, but I'm glad I stuck with it until the end. Very well told, good detail, ominous feeling, bittersweet emotion. Thanks so much!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-39494052136916758262010-01-22T16:03:19.981+00:002010-01-22T16:03:19.981+00:00Poor guy.. hopefully he won't have to find a n...Poor guy.. hopefully he won't have to find a new career while having to support a new family.<br />Very good!CJ Hodges MacFarlanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16833789408143274185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-12318852221092864292010-01-22T16:02:01.838+00:002010-01-22T16:02:01.838+00:00good twist, or indeed anti-twist as I refer to tho...good twist, or indeed anti-twist as I refer to those kind of twists :-)<br />I would like to see a full-on horror story from you one day. LWG future task, maybe?mazzz in Leedshttp://mazzz-in-leeds.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-30916404641821612462010-01-22T15:56:11.027+00:002010-01-22T15:56:11.027+00:00Sad. . . but well told!
JimSad. . . but well told!<br /><br />JimJim Bronyaurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09580674307591916148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-18501055324441665392010-01-22T11:51:54.138+00:002010-01-22T11:51:54.138+00:00Ok I had deep breaths - wondering if I should keep...Ok I had deep breaths - wondering if I should keep reading for fear of nightmares!<br />Good twist.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-45436387779581270372010-01-21T23:46:38.363+00:002010-01-21T23:46:38.363+00:00Love the sinister feel at the beginning. Tipping a...Love the sinister feel at the beginning. Tipping along the edge of dark.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10076907555584959149noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-34166358096102831212010-01-21T21:48:57.766+00:002010-01-21T21:48:57.766+00:00I thought it was a murder story to begin with! Ve...I thought it was a murder story to begin with! Very well told, and I enjoyed the final twist.David Mastershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12809185582216906363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-25519050284847301972010-01-21T19:41:42.793+00:002010-01-21T19:41:42.793+00:00Well you certainly got the impact in there - I tho...Well you certainly got the impact in there - I thought I was going to throw up for a minute. I never thought I'd actually enjoy feeling like I needed to vomit. Superbly told story Amy!Deanna Schrayerhttp://www.theothersideofdeanna.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-27892781945244044532010-01-21T18:31:23.012+00:002010-01-21T18:31:23.012+00:00Wow, I also worried that the man was up to no good...Wow, I also worried that the man was up to no good. Quite surprised, happily, by the twist.<br /><br />Very, very well done.Marisa Birnshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17945909737147497606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-927066659068202592010-01-21T18:16:00.905+00:002010-01-21T18:16:00.905+00:00Huge emotion here. You did a great job of letting...Huge emotion here. You did a great job of letting little, telling details through without giving away the whole thing. Well done.Lauritahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03688820247531607677noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-83726867657572443472010-01-21T18:02:13.362+00:002010-01-21T18:02:13.362+00:00Quite a twist. I was expecting he was up to someth...Quite a twist. I was expecting he was up to something sinister, not just a sad, depressing part of his job. Good, well told story.Eric J. Krausehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05774468607814244185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-39443972386831407962010-01-21T17:58:40.533+00:002010-01-21T17:58:40.533+00:00Brilliantly powerful piece - you made me cry. Grea...Brilliantly powerful piece - you made me cry. Great twist at the end too. Very well done.Samhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00361651251233078437noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-36449866131344083852010-01-21T16:06:32.713+00:002010-01-21T16:06:32.713+00:00You cheeky lady, Carrie! I didn't even tweet t...You cheeky lady, Carrie! I didn't even tweet this yet! :) Thanks for dropping by for a sneak-preview! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I was a little worried about the impact of this one's subject.Amyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01304850820653245569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-48004861803917545342010-01-21T15:43:18.609+00:002010-01-21T15:43:18.609+00:00That is a great twist on this story. I really felt...That is a great twist on this story. I really felt the emotion knock me off my feet at the end. Well, well done.Carrie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05093923008179106837noreply@blogger.com