tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post550426311412196149..comments2023-03-20T09:34:47.785+00:00Comments on Ad Astra (To The Stars): #Fridayflash - DishesAmyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01304850820653245569noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-27325762963927896602010-03-02T13:16:42.353+00:002010-03-02T13:16:42.353+00:00Very sensual. I could feel what he was feeling. In...Very sensual. I could feel what he was feeling. In the end, he was filled with regret. He should have thought twice before he did whatever he did to make her leave.:-)<br />Love this story!Cynthia Schuerrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03975914802967433794noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-64432475988562573022010-03-01T00:44:12.001+00:002010-03-01T00:44:12.001+00:00A heartbreaking end...I really felt sorry for him....A heartbreaking end...I really felt sorry for him.Laura Enohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09982794146667832204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-91759000057504502082010-02-28T19:56:44.561+00:002010-02-28T19:56:44.561+00:00A plate or 'the' plate placed in the rack....A plate or 'the' plate placed in the rack...? Lonely dinner for one, idly fantasising - totally had me all the way it was really happening. Nice.<br /><br />marc nashSulci Collectivehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-63770150904998052692010-02-28T19:34:00.170+00:002010-02-28T19:34:00.170+00:00I agree - heartbreaking at the end.I agree - heartbreaking at the end.Tony Nolandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15090583562737225942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-25572738518966226652010-02-28T19:12:52.370+00:002010-02-28T19:12:52.370+00:00Wow, quite a sexy story. Until the end. Then it tu...Wow, quite a sexy story. Until the end. Then it turned heartbreaking. Great story.Eric J. Krausehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05774468607814244185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-13301319818898731552010-02-28T15:25:15.407+00:002010-02-28T15:25:15.407+00:00As Marisa descibed...very sensual story. Must have...As Marisa descibed...very sensual story. Must have cold shower now...Alan W. Davidsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17067022519729701245noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-40865142117769113122010-02-28T14:57:29.777+00:002010-02-28T14:57:29.777+00:00Really nice story, Amy. The story WAS hot... and t...Really nice story, Amy. The story WAS hot... and the ending was such a surprise. <br />What did he DO????Cathy Olliffe-Websterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12729578896443750402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-74593677941292753402010-02-28T13:53:33.091+00:002010-02-28T13:53:33.091+00:00You've written such a beautiful, sensual piece...You've written such a beautiful, sensual piece about thoughts during...dishwashing! Just wonderful in it's depiction. I agree with Carrie, it IS hot.Marisa Birnshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17945909737147497606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-77760158502532211362010-02-28T13:50:18.154+00:002010-02-28T13:50:18.154+00:00Heh, my first thought was she left because he stop...Heh, my first thought was she left because he stopped doing the dishes.CJ Hodges MacFarlanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16833789408143274185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-74173797319113573632010-02-28T13:05:26.303+00:002010-02-28T13:05:26.303+00:00Shivers! Regret is a terrible thing. Very, very go...Shivers! Regret is a terrible thing. Very, very good, Amy. And doesn't the mind wander when doing the dishes? Like this a lot.<br />Simon.Skycyclerhttp://skycycler.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-67282098751036474252010-02-28T11:19:33.408+00:002010-02-28T11:19:33.408+00:00@mazzz_in_Leeds - Oh, maybe, partially...totally s...@mazzz_in_Leeds - Oh, maybe, partially...totally sub-conscious if it was though! Ha!Amyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01304850820653245569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-47953333264146681472010-02-28T10:29:19.238+00:002010-02-28T10:29:19.238+00:00was this inspired by a certain post-Savage convers...was this inspired by a certain post-Savage conversation we were having...?<br />Like this muchly: "she isn’t even trying, but her act beats mine, hands down"mazzz in Leedshttp://mazzz-in-leeds.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-13579420904349728192010-02-28T03:00:08.415+00:002010-02-28T03:00:08.415+00:00Wow, this was heart-wrenching at the end. And, als...Wow, this was heart-wrenching at the end. And, also quite hot. Excellent!Carrie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05093923008179106837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-83818341023486835292010-02-28T01:59:46.922+00:002010-02-28T01:59:46.922+00:00Lovely and chilling.Lovely and chilling.~Timhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06774944172261988587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-78869478129093049702010-02-28T01:43:57.280+00:002010-02-28T01:43:57.280+00:00I've been there. Beautifully rendered.I've been there. Beautifully rendered.PDAllenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10435612569640060391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-84321410942189017552010-02-28T01:26:46.410+00:002010-02-28T01:26:46.410+00:00Intriguing, indeed. Nice descriptions. Late? It...Intriguing, indeed. Nice descriptions. Late? It's still Saturday for me and it takes me several days to read everything. Just in time as far as I'm concerned.<br />-David G ShrockAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10076907555584959149noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-48463682202523773242010-02-28T01:18:14.341+00:002010-02-28T01:18:14.341+00:00Intriguing. Is she a ghost, a memory, a fantasy? ...Intriguing. Is she a ghost, a memory, a fantasy? This is very well written and leaves just enough open to interpretation.Genevieve Jackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16178276724159826428noreply@blogger.com