tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post6931806572207146785..comments2023-03-20T09:34:47.785+00:00Comments on Ad Astra (To The Stars): Not Quite A #Fridayflash - A Modern Fairytale in VerseAmyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01304850820653245569noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-13457704499558009162010-01-02T02:58:11.714+00:002010-01-02T02:58:11.714+00:00I like this take on the Rapunzel theme very much. ...I like this take on the Rapunzel theme very much. I think with some tweaking (minor) this would be a most stellar poem. Second, third, and last stanzas very strong. <br /><br />Why not a prose poem? And some dialogue from the Prince? Great stuff - you got me all excited here (uh, can you tell I groove on poetry?). HNY! Peace, LindaLindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01110078016784294934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-45296654205531523432010-01-02T02:47:11.595+00:002010-01-02T02:47:11.595+00:00Ahh What Carrie said!
I loved it!Ahh What Carrie said!<br />I loved it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-41253362086674532412010-01-02T01:08:49.846+00:002010-01-02T01:08:49.846+00:00I was struck by the same line that Anton mentioned...I was struck by the same line that Anton mentioned. This is wonderful - a woman standing up for who she actually is. Bravo!Laura Enohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09982794146667832204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-65217549869513546352010-01-02T00:10:35.180+00:002010-01-02T00:10:35.180+00:00Maybe those lines speak loudest because no one is ...Maybe those lines speak loudest because no one is willing to yeild entirely to another without tests & challenges & adequate proof of passions! We're all ruled by past experiences, which is basically what this poem says: neither Rapunzel nor the prince are blank canvases these days!Amyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01304850820653245569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-60724005961956284502010-01-01T23:55:46.349+00:002010-01-01T23:55:46.349+00:00Very nice, and agree with Anton, best part.Very nice, and agree with Anton, best part.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10076907555584959149noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-9965708307645350052010-01-01T23:47:00.414+00:002010-01-01T23:47:00.414+00:00Thanks guys! I'm so pleased you liked it. Mayb...Thanks guys! I'm so pleased you liked it. Maybe I'll work on putting it into prose this week. :)Amyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01304850820653245569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-67061004851910951542010-01-01T22:40:33.006+00:002010-01-01T22:40:33.006+00:00That was great. I loved this line:
"Nothing ...That was great. I loved this line:<br /><br /><b>"Nothing passes unchallenged there –<br />your fingers on my soul, you see, are different<br />to your fingers<br />in my hair."</b>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-72379773301852224172010-01-01T22:29:46.994+00:002010-01-01T22:29:46.994+00:00This was a cool interpretation of an old tale. Wel...This was a cool interpretation of an old tale. Well done.<br /><br />The end is a bit anticlimactic [I wanted more] - however, I think you captured the prince's uncertainty nicely.TFhttp://leadigloo.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3876867863906161875.post-222214613840983732010-01-01T22:14:13.625+00:002010-01-01T22:14:13.625+00:00Damn, this was fantastic! You've a gift.Damn, this was fantastic! You've a gift.Carrie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05093923008179106837noreply@blogger.com